Life@lifeline-1 Poem by Kalky Inkler

Life@lifeline-1



Dreams, Desires and Destinies
scramble through a door,
Fights, Spats, Curse
make up the aura,
Sweat, Tears, Saliva
are the offerings made,
Fame, Fortune, Food
with you they ride,

Zipped mouths, Sewed ears, Stapled eyes,
Greedy hearts, Screaming souls, Killer instincts,

Come ride with creatures on the life-line.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glancy A 20 April 2008

Excellent! Very visual and immediately throws the reader into the picture frame of the poem. Very very good. the style of the poem is also excellent esp with the breaking of the two words...very action packed and real! Good work here. good figures of speech.

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