(life/Philosophy) Let It Flower! ! Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(life/Philosophy) Let It Flower! !

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Awareness
A state of mind that absorbs it all
Chirping birds, flowers on the tree,
Dew on the grass, Flaming flowers
Kites bobbing in the sky, the wispy cloud
Wonder in the child's eye, lapping waves of the sea
To be aware of the totality
Of your being till the last
Your darting thoughts and its transcience
The love, the lust and the jealousy
The flowing compassion, the searing pain
Never fragmented
Never narrow
Never limiting
It doesnt have value
Its neither right or wrong
Just being aware of it
It doesnt belong
To you or me or for that matter..anyone
Freedom of thought is in your power
Let every thought
Every feeling flower

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 08 May 2007

Each day is a gift and a new beginning. To be aware is to be alive. Very positive. You have a way with words. Warm regards, Sandra

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David Taylor 25 April 2007

In every moment, every hour, your poem's true, its meanings flower. I must say, your poems good, and its meaning? Understood!

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