Life's Mire Poem by Y Sunita Devi

Life's Mire

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From the day we had seen light of the world,
we had been thrown in the mad rush of the world,
not knowing where we are heading to,
What is our purpose and what is our desire!


Meaning of desire have contours with ambiguity,
for it has no relevant meaning, it has no known direction,
Our heart started craving for what looks bright to the mad rush of the world,
not knowing where we are landing-

We are following and letting ourselves flow with the mire,
that in times to come will land us to unhappiness, exhaustion,
which will inevitably lead us to the world of
Death, destruction and heartche!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sebastine Humaemo 09 January 2009

hy winnie soo well written, , , , , much true we do walk like a blind without knowin whts gonna happn n this life the nxt min........ ' not knowing where we are heading to .....' ..............beautiful line 10+ sebastine....

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Kesav Easwaran 27 December 2008

yes... thrown out in the mire...treading cautiously on god loving toes is all important on the journey ahead...meaningful write presented in good lines, Winnie..10

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