Life Without Love Poem by Danielle Franklin

Life Without Love

Rating: 4.3


Life without you
Is what I can’t pretend is normal
It’s a life without love
A life without trust
It’s going with no where to go
I dread this world of hate and pain
But you make it bearable
Without you I suffer horribly
Its life without love I fear
Its moving on with you gone
Its losing you and me too

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 17 December 2007

Simple and moving! Greatly emotional.

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You illuminate the pain of lost love strongly throughout this short poem. Nicely done and thank you for letting me read and comment on your work. L&T

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Who Iam 12 January 2008

A true expression of what Love means to many of us. Your insight is not measured in years. I sence it has more to do with your convictions about life... Your passion, and emotion are written between the lines Stay strong in your beliefs, your poetry has meaning...

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Broken Peaces 09 January 2008

A poem full of maturity for one so young, fuul of feeling and passion good write top marks Chris

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Patricia Gale 08 January 2008

A lot of heart is penned in this piece Danielle Well done in showing the emotion

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This is a very well written piece - honest and real... I hope the fear of love will subside leaving all you want and need...

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Danielle Franklin

Danielle Franklin

Mineral Wells, Texas
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