Life Without You.... Poem by priti gupta

Life Without You....

Rating: 5.0


Life without you will be....
Like the snowy days
Looking out for rays
but finding only glace.

Life without you will be....
Sitting on the shore
Writing the poems
& feeling so alone.

Life without you will be....
A candle in the dark
Gives its light
but only to a certain part.

Life without you will be....
Like the ocean
Where one will be lost
between thousand of emotions.

BUT........
My life without you will be....
Like meeting an accident
Fighting with the last breadth
in the hope to see you at the end......

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Great writer

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Great writer

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Ted M 18 July 2009

Very emotional and reflects commitment. great write

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Kali Abyss 18 July 2009

This one is beautifull 10!

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