Lifecycle (Tanka) Poem by David Wood

Lifecycle (Tanka)

Rating: 5.0


The new buds of May
Bathes in the suns warm embrace
Drinks the early dew
Matures in the summer sun
Fades in glorious colour

Saturday, September 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: seasons
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
5,7,5,7,7 syllables
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 September 2015

Another beauty about buds bathing in the sun. Congratulations on your 400th poem. Keep going.

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Miraj Raha 12 September 2015

perfect description of a Life cycle, I was connected to the poem right from drinking the dew to fading.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2015

Wonderful Tanka with wise imagery where new buds are of having bath with sun's rays. Wise sharing....10

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