Lifes Dance Poem by Elias Barcelona

Lifes Dance



Every person i meet
Every person i greet
I smile at them
They smile at me
We move away
As we shuffle our feet
Even as i wish to stay
We move away
As if to a beat
Every person i meet
Every person i greet
I leave them
They leave me
Alone again infinitely
Am left
Thoughtful
And empty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rinki Nandy 25 June 2010

thats the reality, the fact, truth of life, 'we are all together in being all alone'. funny and ironic. mature write.

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Robin Machorro 05 June 2010

this is very true... i can relate to this so much.. then again i bet alot of people can too ahh you have a great talent with writeing :)

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Marieta Maglas 04 June 2010

beautiful thoughts expressed in evocative poetical words....I like it.

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Preetam Shetty 03 June 2010

So very true, , , , In life we meet so many of them, some whom we want to stay but then life doesnt always work the way we want it to

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