Light Rays Travel Faster Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Light Rays Travel Faster

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Light rays travel faster
Sound waves are slower
Sun rays take few minutes to reach earth
It is our life line and really worth

Whole of universe is dependent
On light rays and its place is prominent
Even many religions worship sun
Even seasons change including monsoon

Some others medium is faster than light
Thoughts travel and loose our sight
It reaches far end and see the object
Even thought it is imagery but lovely act

Can distance mar the relation?
No, it has nothing to do with any equation
No speed or hindrance of any kind
Can obstruct even the blind

Through vision he or she can reach far places
To convey message even if finds no trace
Some of the relatives or friends may be living at unknown destination
But thoughts reach there to strengthen the relation

Where sun can not reach!
The poet reaches and touches
But where poets also can not visit
There goes wishes and greet

Very powerful medium as I observed
It has rightly served
Mankind with its fancy
Real gift from almighty

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2013

Light rays travel faster Sound waves are slower

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2013

good Ismail Wikimedia53 minutes ago nice Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2013

Ife Aladegbola53 minutes ago cool

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2013

Christopher50 minutes ago I think as a poet now and days you should have different styles, some simple, some more poetic, some with more syllables so on and so forth, which for me it was vividly put together in good imagery, but i felt it should have sounded more Shakesphere, more poetic like, too leave a little more wonder in your readers

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2013

good Morgan Hamilton52 minutes ago You rhyme good with your words rythem Comment +1 It's ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 August 2013

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