Light Years From The Others Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Light Years From The Others



Your touch...
Light years from the others.
Sought and needed much.

Attentive you are!
What you deliver is attentiveness.
The ones i thought as lovers then...
I dare not now to mention.

Something new within me flourishes.
I feel encouraged and do my best,
To be receptive.

No matter what my mood,
My attitude has always been by you approved.
And improved too!

Your touch...
Is light years away from the others.
And smothered by your love I am spolied.

When your attentiveness is given,
I care less who expresses,
You have got me rotten!
Yes.

And it is my wish to stink with it.
That's how long this has been needed.
And you, Have succeeded...
Beyond my dreams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
. . 14 September 2009

What a wonderful way with words you have! Brilliant! :)

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Carol Gall 14 September 2009

great write says so much

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