Lights Camera Action Are The Last Words I Hear Poem by widelene ermat

Lights Camera Action Are The Last Words I Hear



lights camera action are the last words i hear
just then i rushed with the feeling of fear
the lights are on the show has begun
but all i see is the gun
its pointed at my face and there i am screaming
then i notice its fake and we were filming
emotions run wild as i try to play of pool of tears
then applause begins as it thunders through my ears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 30 June 2014

nice written, it describes the feelings that go occurs when one is in front of the camera

0 0 Reply
Tai Chi Italy 01 July 2008

A good capture carmen, a few typos fixed will perfect it's surrealist image. Life has it's unexpected turns, we just have to go with it's rock and rolling sometimes. Tai

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success