Like In Hot Water, In A Bath, Poem by Liza Sud

Like In Hot Water, In A Bath,

I will feel myself so nice,
like in hot water, in a bath,
as a child feels warmth around,
and the face to the dimples smiles.

I will feel myself so pleased,
like from first words in infancy,
when you learn language just by words and
and should never stop such a progress.

And I assume that every five
years we need to change the language -
we will learn so many guys,
so many prayers and parties!

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А мне будет так хорошо,
как в горячей водичке, в ванночке,
как дитя чувствует тепло,
и лицо улыбают ямочки.

А мне будет так хорошо,
как от первых слов в раннем детстве,
когда учишь язык со слов,
и не остановить прогресса.

Я так думаю, что раз в пять
лет нам надо менять язык -
сколько новых чувств будем знать,
сколько праздников и молитв!

Friday, July 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: infantile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 08 August 2016

This a poem of delight - simple, immediate delights. The references to hot baths, contented infants. etc, show a elementary level of satisfaction. But introducing language development takes us to the end of infancy into the age of consciousness. A speaking child has words and can now focus on particular delights. It's not WaWaWA! until someone responds, it's, Mom, can I eat a cookie. But you also suggest the beginnings of a social and life and even a prayer life. The versatility of language is celebrated.

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Daniel Brick 23 July 2016

This is a poem of self-satisfaction, as you affirm in two passages: I FEEL MYSELF SO NICE and I WILL FEEL MYSELF SO PLEASED. But this feeling doesn't come from vanity or complacency. Rather it derives from a child's intuitive and total sense of being. It's a mysterious state we lose as we grow older and more self-conscious, but you've regained it, a renewed state of expectation and even innocence. Very different from what adults usually feel. I'm wondering if behind thgis transformation is an echo of what Jesus said to Nicodemus, that we have to become like children to enter the Kingdom of Heaven. That would explain the dynamics of the poem's sense of fulfillment.

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