Limerick.14.Escape Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.14.Escape

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On a hill top, lived a man so stingy
Though wealthy, his house was so dingy
When his wife asked for money
He would chortle- ‘No Honey'
Fed up, she eloped with a stranger on a pony

Monday, July 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dinesan Madathil 15 July 2014

She escaped with her' lover'... so she had a lover even earlier! Is it an escape?

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Kanav Justa 15 July 2014

Haha..money cant buy love.... the end is fabulous....

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The end comes this way for stingy man like him.........Valsa.........eloped with the love finally..........very funny

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 July 2014

Beautiful poem Valsa. I think there can be nothing better rather than sitting and crying. She is quiet practical. Loved it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2018

A beautiful limerick full with humor. Enjoyed the fun. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 April 2018

A brilliant Limerick dear madam! The last line is interesting....really nothing else could have been done! Little poems with a bit of humor is just like a hot cup of coffee! Enjoyed!

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Valsa George 12 April 2018

Thanks a lot Dillip....! Glad to know you enjoyed it like a hot cup of tea!

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Akhtar Jawad 11 August 2014

The realities of life, and Valsa's pen, an outstanding output.

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Piyush Dey 10 August 2014

nice poem and message. beautifully written.

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Amitava Sur 18 July 2014

A beautiful poem in limerick form, enjoyed thoroughly. A stingy man being in dingy is supposed to be lonely... very true. Ha Ha Ha.

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