Valsa George

Limerick.14.Escape - Poem by Valsa George

On a hill top, lived a man so stingy
Though wealthy, his house was so dingy
When his wife asked for money
He would chortle- ‘No Honey'
Fed up, she eloped with a stranger on a pony

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Limerick.14.Escape by Valsa George

  • Gold Star - 50,619 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/11/2014 2:58:00 AM)

    The realities of life, and Valsa's pen, an outstanding output. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,281 Points Piyush Dey (8/10/2014 4:41:00 AM)

    nice poem and message. beautifully written. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,214 Points Amitava Sur (7/18/2014 8:54:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem in limerick form, enjoyed thoroughly. A stingy man being in dingy is supposed to be lonely... very true. Ha Ha Ha. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/17/2014 9:24:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Valsa. I think there can be nothing better rather than sitting and crying. She is quiet practical. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,757 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (7/16/2014 7:56:00 AM)

    The end comes this way for stingy man like him.........Valsa.........eloped with the love finally..........very funny (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Kanav Justa (7/15/2014 10:48:00 PM) cant buy love.... the end is fabulous.... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (7/15/2014 3:29:00 AM)

    She escaped with her' lover'... so she had a lover even earlier! Is it an escape? (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 45,462 Points Valsa George (7/15/2014 10:12:00 PM)

    Now only I thought of it.....! I shall make it- 'a stranger, rather than lover'.........! Thank you Dinesh!

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/15/2014 1:50:00 AM)

    that's how it happens: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 399 Points Kirti Sharma (7/15/2014 12:21:00 AM)

    : D i like the rhyming!
    nice poem! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 14, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 12, 2015

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