Limerick.30. What Says The Autopsy Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.30. What Says The Autopsy

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Each day he drank a bottle of rum whole
And in his liver was found a big hole
Sad, met with a sudden death
His doctor said in one breath
'There was no more blood in his alcohol'!

Friday, March 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: alcoholism
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 20 March 2015

Ha...ha...ha! ! ! The entire scene comes to mind to trigger a rapturous laugh. Thanks for providing a lighter moment, Valsa ji.

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Valsa George 21 March 2015

Thank you Rajnish sir! I am happy I could make you laugh!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2015

It so sad. Meeting with death is definite although sorrowful. Wonderful Limerick shared. Very much meaningful and thought provoking.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 March 2015

It so sad. Meeting with death is definite although sorrowful. Wonderful Limerick shared. Very much meaningful and thought provoking. Very wisely drafted.

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Stephen Katona 20 March 2015

Black humour is a powerful way to deliver a message. Well done.

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 May 2019

A limerick worth its name, well penned

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Rajkamal P.j 16 June 2015

There is a strong message. Well penned and glad to see that you have addressed a social evil. Congrats..

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 April 2015

Quite Humorous one. Such a wonderful person as per doctors report that he lived all the life with no blood. Fantastic write as usual from your pen. Loved it.

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Bri Edwards 06 April 2015

you've done it AGAIN, Valsa. beaten me to the punch, and i don't mean fruit punch. i wrote a limerick with these very same words just this morning. little did i know you had read my mind and submitted yours first! ! ! woe is me. but, SERIOUSLY, I was almost provoked to laughter by this, but i held back in respect for the deceased's relatives. even though hole' and whole sound TOO MUCH ALIKE to me, AND alcohol doesn't rhyme 'enough' for my taste (no pun intended; REALLY) , i STILL used the very same wording as you did. i really could not do better. AND the three words may not be my favorite audio-rhymes, but they are great visual-rhymes. SEE what i mean? ? the black humour (humor for my American colleagues) , as Stephen Katona points out is powerful. i'll cut back to a HALF a bottle of scotch per day. bri :)

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 28 March 2015

Oh this is brilliant....Valsa......and very funny indeed.......I liked it very much......outstanding piece....10

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