Limerick-The Great Hunter-10 Poem by Loke Kok yee

Limerick-The Great Hunter-10

Rating: 5.0


This great hunter was out looking for a bear
Was advised by those wiser to watch his rear
He was careless in the woods
Woke a grizzly in a bad mood
Now he moans and groans under intensive care

Limerick-The Great Hunter-10
Saturday, October 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 31 October 2015

Some advise can not be ignored otherwise it may lead to such awkward situation....Liked it Mr. Loke....10

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Amar Agarwala 25 March 2016

Hey Lok, Your limericks are funny and good.

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Seema Jayaraman 31 October 2015

Enjoyed the Limerick.. Well rhymed and well constructed

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 31 October 2015

Verily, taking things at ease is to bring ourselves out of ease.

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Sanjukta Nag 31 October 2015

Superb superb....... you are filled with humour. Loved it.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 October 2015

So sad and so funny. Person who doesn't obey the advise sometimes bears trouble. I like the way of presentation dear Loke, thanks for sharing.....10

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