Limericks,11,12 Love At First Sight, Love As It Runs Poem by Valsa George
Limericks,11,12 Love At First Sight, Love As It Runs
Limerick… Love at First Sight
A lad and lass, on first sight fell in love
They flew as they were a pair of dove
First it gave them pleasure
Later it raised their pressure
Cutting the bond (age) , they together exclaimed 'Wow'
Limerick… Love as it Runs
He sang-‘You're like a red, red rose
With you my life ever glows'
She sang- ‘But you're like a thorn
Your presence, I greatly mourn'
They together sang- ‘So we shall end our woes'
love this simple take on satire on love turning burdensome.
Nice satirical verses. Hope love will have a better end sometimes.
Both the limericks presents the humourous side of the poet. Second one is funnier than the first one. Enjoyed reading both. :) :) :)
The first limerick about love and pressure is interesting and the second one is more interesting. Beautiful limericks with fun and humor amazingly shared. A 10
a pair of lovely limericks your poems are always a pleasure to read thanks Valsa-10++
A very pleasant read. Enjoyed this light hearted poem very much.
Very nice Valsa - both of them satisfy the real theme of limerick.... enjoyed a lot
Beautiful verses you have turned into a humorous ones.... Loved it......Smiles..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/20/2024 12:20:29 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A sweet love poem aesthetically conceived.........Valsa........though a kind of humorous verse.............nicely composed indeed