Listen My Question Poem by Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India

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Listen to my questions first
Are you all in happy mood here
Are you passing your days in happiness
Are you doing well
Are you all eternally bound
In friendship with rest
And remember the welfare of all
Are you affectionate and love all
And enjoying the pious world
And getting nectar here under
This spiritual sky
Are you progressing step by step
to Him who is all in all.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
towards eternity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arti Chopra 09 August 2013

You have asked me to read and appreciate your poems, they are good but I wish you would pay alittle more attention to grammatical errors.For eg. In the above poem if you had written Listen to my questions, It would make for better reading. hope you take my remarks in the correct spirit Regards Arti Chopra

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Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
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