Little Use Of Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Little Use Of

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Impatience is main factor
Responsible for total failure
The destiny is pushed far
And seen like distant object as star

People draw swords
With little use of words
They want to score quickly
And repent later on sadly

The worldly tension and worries
Forces person to hurry up
Wait for no passion hearing
And invite trouble with fear

So patience is key to the success
Even though the result may be faced
Little later but with sweetness
That is real feeling with shine on face

There is no use of getting into wrangles
Over patchy issues with any of the angle
It invites an end of the relation and bitterness
It is not all advisable to invite such things and face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2014

Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh! 5 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 April 2014

YES Adrian Johnson17 minutes ago YES

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 April 2014

Okay Bill Brocker16 minutes ago Not everyone should be a cridict Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 April 2014

Impatience is main factor Responsible for total failure

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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