Little Whims We Always Care… Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Little Whims We Always Care…



Little whims we always care,
We hold on to our hearts;
But many things we know brittle,
We let them slip out of hands!

Lot of kinks we should let go
We tell ourselves to hold
What’s kicking inside? Ego;
End up beaten down, ten fold!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 23 September 2009

wonderful philosophical poem, well penned with deep ideas, thank you for sharing..........10++++++++

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Eyan Desir 23 September 2009

Interesting little poem you wrote there

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Vidi Writes 24 September 2009

Thats the true story of our daily affairs Yeilding to those fads, first Then look back and think.. hey.. go or not! ! ! Holding on to the voices of extreem self sense... Let go.. the treasure time of life. Whims and Fancies, we care Somewhere we have to lose For for reasons of our own or others. But dear, poet, you are so true Without these... caprice.. What life.. after all. As usual.. an absolute delight to read this. Hitting staright into the bull's eye. Thank you.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 24 September 2009

If i say something in the light of pomo[postmodern] interpretation, that would be, signifiers- the words and the 'I' behind this poem successfully emitted signifieds which blooming in readers mind multiple way! thaoughtful and beautiful! 10+

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Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

Ego; End up beaten down, ten fold! --------- great composition in 2 stanzas, philosophical one.......great opus about ego! ! !

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Pandian Angelina 05 October 2009

Penny wise and Pound foolish - you propound so well, Ego a small word but causes even catastrophes in life. A wise poem to be heeded well in life as well. Short and crisp you serve Truth well.Angel

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Raj Arumugam 05 October 2009

a poem with deep insight into our very nature, Kesav

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Raj Nandy 03 October 2009

GREAT THOUGHTS AND ADVICE IN VERSE! WE WANT OTHERS TO CHANGE! BUT ALL SUCH CHANGES SHOULD BEGIN WITH US! 10 + -Raj

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Yelena M. 02 October 2009

A very introspective one, deep ideas in few words. Agree with Sonya on this point. Perfect flow and rhythm as always, Kesav.Thanks for sharing with us. Yelena M.

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 October 2009

A one go read, for its smoothness, with sour ego, we are so bound to it.10

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