Little whims we always care,
We hold on to our hearts;
But many things we know brittle,
We let them slip out of hands!
Lot of kinks we should let go
We tell ourselves to hold
What’s kicking inside? Ego;
End up beaten down, ten fold!
Thats the true story of our daily affairs Yeilding to those fads, first Then look back and think.. hey.. go or not! ! ! Holding on to the voices of extreem self sense... Let go.. the treasure time of life. Whims and Fancies, we care Somewhere we have to lose For for reasons of our own or others. But dear, poet, you are so true Without these... caprice.. What life.. after all. As usual.. an absolute delight to read this. Hitting staright into the bull's eye. Thank you.
If i say something in the light of pomo[postmodern] interpretation, that would be, signifiers- the words and the 'I' behind this poem successfully emitted signifieds which blooming in readers mind multiple way! thaoughtful and beautiful! 10+
Ego; End up beaten down, ten fold! --------- great composition in 2 stanzas, philosophical one.......great opus about ego! ! !
Penny wise and Pound foolish - you propound so well, Ego a small word but causes even catastrophes in life. A wise poem to be heeded well in life as well. Short and crisp you serve Truth well.Angel
GREAT THOUGHTS AND ADVICE IN VERSE! WE WANT OTHERS TO CHANGE! BUT ALL SUCH CHANGES SHOULD BEGIN WITH US! 10 + -Raj
A very introspective one, deep ideas in few words. Agree with Sonya on this point. Perfect flow and rhythm as always, Kesav.Thanks for sharing with us. Yelena M.
A one go read, for its smoothness, with sour ego, we are so bound to it.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wonderful philosophical poem, well penned with deep ideas, thank you for sharing..........10++++++++