Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 5,894 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Little Yellow Flowers - Poem by Valerie Dohren

Little yellow flowers
Dancing in the breeze
Little yellow flowers
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Comments about Little Yellow Flowers by Valerie Dohren

  • (9/1/2013 3:27:00 AM)

    The message from the little flowers gives a soothing message short and luvli poem (Report) Reply

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  • (6/13/2013 10:20:00 AM)

    !) I mean 10, great write, perfect. (Report) Reply

  • (7/14/2012 7:03:00 PM)

    Makes you take a second look at life and nature—the little things that mean so much. Very beautiful, rich and terse. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (7/14/2012 6:45:00 AM)

    It reminds me the lines of Wordsworth's poem, Daffodils. Short but very deep. (Report) Reply

  • Elna Nel (7/13/2012 3:35:00 PM)

    this is beautiful, in its simplicity (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (7/3/2012 3:34:00 PM)

    Perhaps those flowers are dandelions. Read mine - Of Dandelions and Tears -
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  • (7/3/2012 12:42:00 PM)

    In the Great mojave desert, spring brings an abundance of little yellow flowers. I can't tell you the joy they bring, beautiful poem Val. (Report) Reply

  • (7/1/2012 4:37:00 PM)

    It's the simple things and small memories
    that give us our greatest comfort
    and cause our quills to write.
    I sense you saw their vulnerability
    yet they supported one another through
    the storms of life. Great write.
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  • (6/29/2012 4:47:00 PM)

    Just read this again, lovely. Thank you Val. (Report) Reply

  • (6/29/2012 2:00:00 PM)

    A rather quaint little poem, the king likes it
    Very much.
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  • (6/29/2012 3:22:00 AM)

    Neat. (Report) Reply

  • (6/27/2012 12:37:00 PM)

    Let us hope those flowers will bloom again.Though wrapped in a poignant imagery style I sense your
    pain. A disturbingly, sad write
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  • (6/25/2012 6:24:00 AM)

    Little yellow flowers in drifting shadow breeze they heave and swell, fragrant in Suns hue their radiance flows to dwell. Daisies or daffodil? Does it not matter to name apart that which intrinsically brings comfort to an open and willing heart. A beauteous poem and I can see those flowers and their gleaming butter smile. Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (6/24/2012 7:53:00 PM)

    Sometimes the things we usually ignore have so much significance.
    Wonderful poem Val.
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  • (6/24/2012 2:17:00 PM)

    a 10 for your brief and perfect poem (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (6/24/2012 1:05:00 PM)

    Yellow flowers Val, beautiful with so much meaning and thought.lovely little poem. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (6/24/2012 7:26:00 AM)

    Super poetic. The little yellow flowers that mean so few to many, mean a whole world to a poet.
    I truly love this poem.
    Very well written and full of meaning.
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  • (6/24/2012 6:08:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem with a wonderful flow. (Report) Reply

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