Live in the my mind,
Live in the my world,
You're very wild,
I'm very cold.
Live in the my spell,
live in the my prose,
It's very well,
I brought a rose.
Where are you now?
where is my girl?
I love... it's my vow
I know you're my pearl.
Give me your sorrow,
Give me your pain,
I'm lonely tomorrow
Because I am rain...
awwww lucky girl better come find you...! ! ! ! ! You might want to think about taking the 'the's out before my mind and my world, they make the piece slower to comprehend... Overall fantastical job! :) : P
A gentle sort of 'rap' poem - with a pleasing beat and an easily accessible structure. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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I would like to translate this poem
Give me your sorrow, Give me your pain, I'm lonely tomorrow Because I am rain......beautiful one with lovely words....10 read mine rain delay...rain has come... watchinghelplessly.. all rain poems...