Live... Poem by alex andreev

Live...

Rating: 5.0


Live in the my mind,
Live in the my world,
You're very wild,
I'm very cold.

Live in the my spell,
live in the my prose,
It's very well,
I brought a rose.

Where are you now?
where is my girl?
I love... it's my vow
I know you're my pearl.

Give me your sorrow,
Give me your pain,
I'm lonely tomorrow
Because I am rain...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Give me your sorrow, Give me your pain, I'm lonely tomorrow Because I am rain......beautiful one with lovely words....10 read mine rain delay...rain has come... watchinghelplessly.. all rain poems...

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Alandra Moreira 14 July 2009

awwww lucky girl better come find you...! ! ! ! ! You might want to think about taking the 'the's out before my mind and my world, they make the piece slower to comprehend... Overall fantastical job! :) : P

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Angelic Warrior 21 June 2009

:) .....that's sweet.....a nice little piece 10 :)

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Eyan Desir 19 June 2009

Keep living your life 10s......

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Alison Cassidy 18 June 2009

A gentle sort of 'rap' poem - with a pleasing beat and an easily accessible structure. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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