Live Race Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Live Race

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Let it be art, science or trade
They are like edges of blade
Never allow you easy success
Many times you will loose the face

Try hard and overcome the line
Push everything aside and keep on side line
The success story may be repeated
Happiness and joy with us and to feel elated

We are not here to cry over failure
Nothing is certain or to be taken for sure
Original product may turn out to be impure
So is life and may turn any time sour

Love to live and enjoy rich fruits
It may give you room to suit
Adjust with the odds and face
Life is constant chase and live race

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2012

Let it be art, science or trade They are like edges of blade

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2012

rain An empowering speech with a wise conclusion in the end.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2012

seema chowdhury Beautiful thought

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2012

Laura Bailey Very nicely done Hasmukh Mehta.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2012

T A Ramesh this is the status of one of a kind art ever! After sometime that will rule the minds of all!

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 26 March 2012

Life is a constant changing race....it blows hot and it can also blow cold....i think thats the theme...enjoy the good things of life but prepare for the ever changing scenario too...good writeup...+

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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