Locked Away Deeply Poem by Fay Slimm

Locked Away Deeply

Rating: 5.0


Stored and discreetly labelled are my dreams.
Time's woven net hides desire in mid-flight.
Our moments, like locked away gems, still gleam
But stay out of sight in dawn's piercing light.

We had our hour, which burned with furnace-fire
And hearts, thus fed, will ever beat as one.
We tied ourselves away from our desire,
But freedom found in love means love goes on.

The song you sent my soul I etched in deeply.
Locked away now, it stays with me completely.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 27 August 2009

Fay, this one gave me the shudders (in a good way) . Top class piece of writing. Regards, Ian

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 September 2009

This is first i read your poem! I am touched by this heartfelt eloquence! the last couplet REMARKABLE! 10+

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Sandra Fowler 09 September 2009

True poetry is timeless. Haunting last lines. You shine on poemhunter, Fay. Never say farewell. Love from one of your many far away friends, Sandra

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Lady Grace 07 September 2009

THIS IS SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL DEAR..

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Carol Gall 27 August 2009

this is so lovely fay...

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Bob Gibson 27 August 2009

In the dark labyrinths of the mind a portal contains, two hearts entwined access denied to all but one to be relived in the evening sun

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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