Loft Poem by jeff thornton

Loft

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Loft

Your heart, so leaden;
weighs at mine-

I can displace gravity from
this one,
that the other might waft
in parallel course?

Yet- if yours ever it finds itself
lofted above my own
perhaps it will slow,
and remember.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
No Name 09 August 2006

I like the revision so much better than this early work. Hard to find your stuff in bookstores, 'jeff'!

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knot Available 04 November 2004

You think she has forgotten to love you. Women don't forget nothing! Very touching.

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