Lol Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lol

Rating: 3.5


When I laugh out loud...
You can't hear me roar!
I think your actions are quite funny.
Even if I wanted...
I could NOT ignore!
The things you do and say,
Are unique in their own way!
But it's amusing to me,
That you can't see
My thoughts of yours that stay!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 29 September 2006

I took the liberty to thank Ms Tai Chi Italy (an alias among others she uses) , about bringing to my attention of an error I made in this poem! Not only did she NOT think it was a compliment thanking her...she sent me a very nasty cursing private message! I did not appreciate it and told her so! WHOEVER this 'person' is who feels she has to hide behind an alias to offend people on this site, needs to find another method to vent her insecurities!

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***** ********* 29 September 2006

That's ok Lawrence, you rude old man. Tai!

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 29 September 2006

Thanks, Tai for catching my error...(at) now (out) ...thanks! L

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Tiyler Durden 29 September 2006

Nice poem man, paints a very clear picture, keep this up 10 for tiyler

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