Lone Ranger Poem by Alonzeyah Omangpang

Lone Ranger

Rating: 3.9


I sit in an unknown place,
Thinking it is safe.
I laugh and admire all the things you do,
Even gave myself all to you.
But the thunder startled my peaceful state
And fell into rock bottom.
I thought you were worried, but your smiling like children playing.
I am shattered and alone, like a lone ranger's soul.

Lone Ranger
Tuesday, December 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We were asked by our english teacher to make a soji poem and I was inspired by my experiences and these are one of them.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shakil Ahmed 08 December 2015

nice poem, you have portrayed your feelings very well in the poem, thanks for sharing,

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Manonton Dalan 28 December 2015

mahusay nakakagalak basain sige sulat pa bossing salamat

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Chinedu Dike 26 December 2015

Unpardonable kind of betrayal is well depicted in the poem. Betrayal not caused by acts of omission or thoughtlessness, but one that's intensional and malicious is always difficult to overlook. A well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Alonzeyah. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 December 2015

I laugh and admire all the things you do, Even gave myself all to you. But the thunder startled. i fell into rockbottom. expressed in an imaginative way all your experiences.. like your poem. tony

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Susan Aparejo 12 December 2015

thank you for posting your poem.

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Kelly Kurt 08 December 2015

I hope you got a good grade. Thanks, Alonzeyah

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Alonzeyah Omangpang 16 December 2015

Thank you so much!

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Alonzeyah Omangpang 16 December 2015

I hope so too, Thanks!

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