I sit in an unknown place,
Thinking it is safe.
I laugh and admire all the things you do,
Even gave myself all to you.
But the thunder startled my peaceful state
And fell into rock bottom.
I thought you were worried, but your smiling like children playing.
I am shattered and alone, like a lone ranger's soul.
Unpardonable kind of betrayal is well depicted in the poem. Betrayal not caused by acts of omission or thoughtlessness, but one that's intensional and malicious is always difficult to overlook. A well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Alonzeyah. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
I laugh and admire all the things you do, Even gave myself all to you. But the thunder startled. i fell into rockbottom. expressed in an imaginative way all your experiences.. like your poem. tony
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice poem, you have portrayed your feelings very well in the poem, thanks for sharing,