Loneliness Poem by Lora Colon

Loneliness

Rating: 4.5


I can't get away from the loneliness,
It hangs over me like a cloud,
It follows me like a stray, hungry dog,
It waits for me in the crowd.

It used to pant and claw at my door,
I resisted, but I knew it would win,
It found the key hidden under the mat
And now it just lets itself in.

The loneliness latched onto me
A long, long time ago,
I never could hide it - it's so obvious
Like a blackbird in the snow.

I've lived with loneliness so long
It's become part of my physique,
I watched as we grew old together,
My loneliness and me.

But, I'm already resigned to this fate,
Looking over my life, I recall
If it hadn't been for the loneliness
I'd have no companion at all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 14 August 2016

I've lived with loneliness so long It's become part of my physique, I watched as we grew old together, My loneliness and me. gee, lora, i'm surprised at you! don't you know that and me does NOT rhyme with physique! ? ? or have i been pronouncing the word physique incorrectly all these years? bri :)

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Khairul Ahsan 18 February 2014

@Brian Johnston, 'But love begins and ends with a choice.' - Loved this beautiful line. The poem is nice.

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Brian Johnston 30 December 2013

The Choice Why does loneliness seem so attractive? (Accepting her love as your fate) Is there really much warmth in her arms? Now just maybe I'm being proactive, And come to the party too late, Still I'm dazzled, I swear, by your charms. Safety's not the path you think it to be, Danger not just man's companion, Or simplicity always God's voice. The real world you see is never risk free, Love's path not just a dark canyon, But love begins and ends with a choice.

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Khairul Ahsan 08 December 2013

I am really amazed to see how beautifully you have depicted loneliness in your poem. By saying: 'It waits for me in the crowd.' you have said what I have always felt-being lonely even in a crowd. 'But, I'm already resigned to this fate, Looking over my life, I recall If it hadn't been for the loneliness I'd have no companion at all.' These lines are so pathetic! Speaks for many.

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A Waltz For Zizi 08 May 2013

Hmm. There must be many Lonelinesses because she is my friend too.

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Lora Colon

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Missouri - United States
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