Loneliness Poem by MNSRAlyssa Bii

Loneliness

Rating: 5.0


I always wonder; why am I so lonely?
Is it because I am clumsy,
Or is it because of my lack in confidence?
I always live life in silence.
Never speaking a single word to those around me
I never had a chance to feel free.
I would always lock myself away from the outside world
Afraid of all the things that made me hurled.
Everyday, when I look at the mirror
I think of life as one big blur.
The only friend I've ever had was darkness
I would always think that life was just pointless.
So everyday, when I draw something gloomy
I ask myself; why am I so lonely?

Tuesday, October 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,hopeless,sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My Everyday Life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 11 October 2016

An insightful depiction of loneliness and sadness occasioned by depression, well articulated and nicely brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. A good portrayal of loss of sunshine is in deplorable life at its lowest ebb. Thanks for sharing Alyssa. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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