Loneliness Poem by Sahar Sahar

Loneliness

Rating: 5.0


on the end of the day,
when i need rest,
i am haunted,
by shadows of loneliness,
my skin gets bare,
to thorns of perilous hunt,
my soul,
lands on horny stones of deceit,
sun hides,
behind darkness,
leaving me,
with howling nightmares.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 21 February 2010

i am haunted, by shadows of loneliness, my skin gets bare, to thorns of perilous hunt, .................... heart riffles deep by lone silence as seems to tremble by nightmares skin of smile hides in darkness do we ever know angle between aloofness and togetherness? wonderful write by imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Afzal Shauq 17 February 2010

sun hides, behind darkness, leaving me, with howling nightmares. a lovely romantic way written poem...enjoyed it 10/10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 08 February 2010

In a broader prospect loneliness is the end all and destiny of every human being. Yoonoos said it rightly that it's a theme for all time. Keep writing, Sahar. Best Wishes. Naseer

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