Loneliness! Poem by saadat tahir

Saadat, you make me smile and cry at the same time. smile, due to your style and choice of words, cry becuase you speak of a universal feeling that we all go through at some point in life. However, the true meaning of life we learn in those moments of utter loneliness, when we realise the only partnership one has is with Him. lovely write Mamta

Just rub my eyes to see clearly, ....... Loneliness is finally to find us in crowland we dwell....as you may think it is blessing sometimes and part of healing for sick man.....it grows to development, indeed, we usually find some corner in seeking tranquility.....well done Doc.....10+++++

quite good the starting of the poem seems to have carried it till its ending

You are the phenomenon. Vivid images, sad yet strong tone and a neat breakout of stanzas. Simply amazing and I just love it. Ro’ya

I like the part about being alone.

Love you Sat... Wonderfully melancholic... seems like you are talking for me... very well written as always....

great great write, , , loved it, , ,

Your art pours like a fine wine. Thank you for the honour of sharing with us.....it would be a pity to keep it all to yourself: -) So lovely.

I could sense your emotions a great and wonderful write......................keep writing always :)

'I abhor to be all alone by myself Like an old bottle stood on the shelf' Strong immagination and rhymes Which kept me reading. I hope you stay on the shelf Looking silently on everyone Who wish to drink your inner wine.