Lonely Poem by Shameem Haider Rao
Lonely
A lonely star in the night
A lonely plant in the desert
A lonely cloud in the sky
A weeping heart in the ocean of happiness
Dry eyes like season of autumn
Loneliness and me sit together, waiting for the moon
Loneliness walk in the fair of world, as beloved of me
A lonely soldier in the war, this is me.
Shameem Haider Rao
It is a beautiful poem. It has wonderful imagery and is quite descriptive. Bien!
Great poem. It's as if you were walking along, looking up and noticed a star, walked farther and noticed a plant in the desert. Continuing on, seeing a cloud in the sky. Loneliness weeps into the ocean of happiness to hide the tears. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
Such a creative write.. Keep it up.. Captures the human behavior..... Surrounded by loneliness... True piece..10 +++ Naila
Nice poem... a reader can feel and imagin your loneliness... So true... and so lonely...
i like your poem just wish you would of kept going with it there is alot of potential if you just let your heart let loose and and let the emotions flow. Also thank you for the kind words you left me in the first message, i feel like i am a not that you say i am. Thank you for your kindness.
A very descriptive and vivid poem on loneliness. Your feelings expressed so vividly. Enjoyed.
Well done in your poem So lonely Great Pls comment on my poems
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/20/2024 11:27:42 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Very nice, very describing.