jim foulk (july 7,1943 / des moines iowa)

very sad..leave no hope as if it is a life time sentece in isolated prison..

The poem has simple but very effective words. Thanks to you for writing this poem because i wasnot able to write one of these.

reminds me of my past
and my days right now

an amazing poem. short and sweet.

i felt the same way before, like you have no one and all you want to do is fix your mistakes.

WHOO HOO! ! ! This IS A SUPERB POEM!

from the first line you i fell in love with it
i really like it

I'm using this poem in class to relate to a short story we're reading, 'A Jury of Her Peers'
Bravo, it fits the story perfectly.

i liked the poem...it had a lot of feeling and soul put into it. it seemed as if you were cutting pieces of your heart and placing them in an order to understand. it gave me goosebumps...it was just sad. i hope that you aren't lonely anymore

Hi Jim

U r writing is gr8.I feel the same as wht u've written. U hav described the loneliness perfectly.
Why are some ppl sooo lonely?

gud writing..

Thanks,
Deepa