Long Gone Poem by Crystal Tutson

Long Gone

Rating: 4.8


Times got so bad I had to change my sheets
because I could smell the scent of you in my sleep

I'm over here with thoughts running through my mind
about the actions we shared and where I went blind

Its confusing; the part that you once played I'm in that role,
playing now for your heart but I can't win because a thief is on the stroll

No matter how in love you are with her, will she ever truly be?
She dropped you once to spread legs with another 'he'

I can't hold on to the 'hope of you' for much too long
I just hope when you come to the conclusion I won't be long gone.

Saturday, November 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: break up
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kera Ann 01 December 2015

Back in 2014 you sent me a message saying that you wished you could write like me, wishing you could write better, and now as i read this i realize that you didn't need to wish such a thing... You are very gifted and what's bad for your heart is good for your art. You have proven that. Very Good Poem :) Now I Wish You The Best.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2015

No matter how in love you are here to survive with imagery with interesting expression. Nice sharing.10

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