Long Way To Go Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

Long Way To Go

Rating: 4.4


Introduction: Eyes can be deceiving...So don't give up with a snap because Its only the beginning. Fight it, ease in your future and make it glow from the gray vicinity.

We exist in an age of shadow,
Shadows that we blindly follow
The moments when we feel so cold,
That is where we need to mold

There are many roads to take,
And judgments to make
No one's going to make our choice,
It's something we hold within our voice

At times the path seems to be a dead-end,
That's the part where everything really extend
We still got a long way to go,
So, don't stroll out and believe it's the end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 02 August 2011

this leaves you thinking about the life in this world...how it fades in and out, how it all functions with human-emotion and directions. my fav is 'There are many roads to take and judgments to make', what an amazing aspect on life you expressed in two lines! Also you showed a great deal of 'holding onto hope' within this msg. I'm really loving your work! wow, so far I read 3 poems (this is the 3rd out of 9) and Already all three got 10/10 lol...Masha'Allah You are some poet man! good stuff...

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Jessie Hopkins 27 September 2011

This poem is so very true. I love it!

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Joseph Gillerlain 14 August 2011

Good poem.. Your poems seem to be very popular..

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Mandi June 25 August 2011

Very well written, Aqeb! This one flows very well, and I love your style of writing!

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Interesting title and reflections on poetry. It will be interesting to read your poetic reflections across the years. Regards Terence :)

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Valerie Dohren 27 December 2012

Great poem, very philosophical.

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Joseph Poewhit 21 May 2012

Don't stop till were in the ground.

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Mona Martinez 21 November 2011

lovely. all so very true.

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Elizabeth Codick 02 October 2011

is the end really the end or is it a new beginning

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Christina Phan 27 September 2011

That is right and its never end and you keep going to you stop.

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