Ben Gieske

- Longer Days/New Neighbor (Haiku, Senryu) - Poem by Ben Gieske

longer days -
catching more
morning melodies

new neighbor
at the hedge
she cuts both sides

published in moonset,2009 Autumn/Winter-Edition 5/Number 2

Comments about - Longer Days/New Neighbor (Haiku, Senryu) by Ben Gieske

  • Rookie Ivor Hogg (11/20/2009 2:30:00 PM)

    Strictly speaking ben both are terse verse Neither complies to the syllable count but none the less both have great impact ivor (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 111 Points Meggie Gultiano (11/8/2009 2:38:00 AM)

    Another excellent piece, Sir Ben...Love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (11/6/2009 6:12:00 AM)

    Both excellent poems Ben and it is good to see a haiku and senryu side by side to note the difference of the forms. I can relate to the longer days as with daylight saving, we have heaps of time to catch those morning melodies. I will go for a look at moonset too and see what beams there! 10 Karin (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 27, 2009

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