Look Forward Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Look Forward

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I feel same sun shine everyday
As usual appearance of bright rays
Normal movement on the road with fresh start
To enjoy the life and know it as real art

Yes for god only knows since how many years
The sun and moon without single miss fail to appear
We on earth count days and time for New Year
Where as nature has already blessed us for not to fear

Nature comes to you not as surprise
It is with full of energy and surprises
If we are generous enough to pick it as chance
We must look back and evaluate it ourselves once

Why we want to have fun fare with any reason?
Nothing was wrong through out the year with seasons
We only had some bitterness with some of the persons
We forgot to know the real blessings favored upon

I shall look towards sky and pray for its vastness
Looks hollow yet how much greatness on face?
Light, dark, sun and moon along with stars find refuge
Yet we raise doubt and argue with the thoughts to refuse

Let us celebrate end of the year as not bye gone time
It might have been unfavorable to us sometimes
But over all it might have proved beneficial to us
Let us be grateful for what was given to us with trust

Let us look forward for some more bright days ahead
Life is uncertain and demands from us to offer lead
Try and make efforts to catch danger in time or read
Try to maintain peace at heart till you are dead

Make it worth that you are leading as human being
World is not limited for rich people or kings
They have come and gone still world remains same
Let us claim ourselves as worthy children and not feel shame

When it is known to us that life has limited span
We needn’t have reason to rejoice for any future plan
Tackle it honestly with much fun fare and rejoice
New Year or bye gone remains to be seen as our choice

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 04 January 2012

Wonderful, optimistic ideas are given. These ideas can be still beautifully expressed in freeverse form. To make the line endings rhyme, generally the poets struggle to express their thoughts with clarity. Unusual word orders may be avoided(single miss fail in stanza 2) . Though the lines sound a little prosaic, the thoughts create pictures and make the lines poetic. Cheers to the poet from a remote place in Gujarat.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 January 2012

JRNightingale 2011.12.30 18: 27 A lovely honest message. Happy New Year Jadia. Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 January 2012

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2 Words of wisdom said with grace and conviction...Happy New Year To you also! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing Yesterday at 9: 34am · Like Aslan Moonbeam nice write about an hour ago · Like 3 minutes ago · Like

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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