Look Into My Eyes And You Will See Poem by Darkangel Flyfree

Look Into My Eyes And You Will See

Rating: 3.7


</>Look into my eyes and you will see
hurt, pain, and the broken heart within.
You will see
the broken spirit, dreams, and all believes has vanished away.

Look into my eyes and you will find
that this girl used to believe in miracles.
She believed dreams and wishes could come true,
if you wished hard enough and strongly believed in them.
But you will also see
that the world took all that away.

Look deeper into my eyes and you will see
that this girl is screaming out for help,
and nobody can hear her, nobody knows.
She has so much love to give
but is scared of rejection and hurt.
She has dreams she wants to accomplish
but doesn't know how.
She wants so much more out of life.

Look into my eyes and you will see
that this girl has been pushed around
for far too long.
As if she has been put on this earth
just to please everyone else.
But what about her, what about what she wants
her dreams and her needs.
Is she not suppose to be happy too.

Look into my eyes and you will see
that this girl wants more than just
diamonds, materialism, fancy cars, and big houses.
She wants so much more than money can buy her.
She wants love, true and real love,
passionate romance, long walks on the beach,
passionate kisses under the moonlit sky,
and late night conversations about anything.
She wants freedom
She wants to follow her heart's desire.

Look into my eyes and you will see
that her heart is way deeper than the ocean,
all the seas, and the universe.
Its way deeper than you could possibly imagine.
Her heart longs for so much more.
Look into my eyes and you will see...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdallah Gamal 07 November 2011

Outstanding. Fabulous poem, really I fell in love with this poem :)

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Romeo Della Valle 07 November 2011

Wow! Excellent and powerful write that clearly gives you away! I can vividly feel your emotions and also feel your pain! I wen through that torturous situation some time ago but I was brave enough to break away! Like I said in my poem: In Pursuit of Happiness, ' I learned the hard and painful ways that where there is an ending there is a new beginning and what I thought was a great loss, it turned out to be a blessing from the sky! You can do it like I did! Keep it up! It is not the end of the World! Be strong! 10+++ God Bless You for always! Romeo

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(De Va) 09 November 2011

this one is so filled with passion and is more real of what true happiness is than what most people can conceive of....love it...blessings

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Zibele Mrasi 29 January 2012

This poem is like a window thru you feel like I know already that's caused by great writing, nice words and poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 April 2020

Look into my eyes and you will see hurt, pain, and the broken heart within. You will see the broken spirit, dreams, and all believes has vanished away..... fantastic beginning with lofty theme. A beautiful philosophical poem is well executed.10.

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Chinedu Dike 11 January 2017

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart ♥ with conviction. Indeed, there are things that are so dear to us that money cannot buy. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 May 2016

She wants love, true and real love, passionate romance, long walks on the beach, passionate kisses under the moonlit sky, and late night conversations about anything. She wants to follow her heart's desire. this is the wish of all the girls born on this earth...... we all want love, not material comfort........love and love alone can fulfill the dreams of the soul. a wonderful poem dear poetess. tony

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Ramesh Rai 11 April 2015

With very simple soft and sweet language you have expressed your deepest emotions. A very praiseworthy write. In my opinion you should look beyond the veil. You Will get enormous light. Keep writing. There are still so many feelings which you need to express. God bless you.

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Guess Who 04 July 2012

Another sorrow grief poem Nice i love your style of writing very intresting + i feel as if you're talking to me well this is the real reality i live in........ Guess Who

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