Looking Back Were We

Was you looking back to see
if I was looking back to see
if you was looking back at me
or was you looking back to see
if I was looking back to see
if I was looking back at yee
whatever the answer may be
I seen you looking back at me
and you seen me looking back at thee
it filled my heart with glee
even though I cant see
what you was looking back to see
all in all
looking back were we

Submitted: Friday, January 16, 2009
Edited: Saturday, January 17, 2009

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  • C.R. Clark (1/16/2009 9:59:00 PM)

    An interesting write. I think I may have gotten lost a time or two, but hey, I was doing a lot of looking back. Anyway, I rather liked what I read. Very nice poem indeed, my friend. well done.
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