Looking For U Poem by shruti modi

Looking For U

Rating: 5.0


I’m so lonely without you
I don’t even know who you are?
I’ve been looking all around
But get a lot of faint glances and lifeless hearts…

How do I even recognize you?
Or would you know it’s me who’s been looking for you!
Would you be sane enough to know that I’ve been insane about you?
Or have you always known that it’s me who’s made for you?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Jos'e 14 August 2008

i hope he is sane to know that you ve been looking for him, nice poem i like it.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 August 2008

this poem reminds me Radhika's appeal to Lord Krishna to come and take her into His arms....may be like Jayadeva's ashtapadi. Very good.10+ sathya narayana

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Sarwar Chowdhury 20 August 2008

..well expressed....10

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Sameer Ahmed 30 January 2009

Nice sweet words with questionable thoughts........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 October 2008

EXPRESSED BFULLY IN SIMPLE WORDS...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

Simple but an intersting poem.

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Reetessh Sabrr 04 September 2008

the wait for the oblivious.. expressed quite well keep it up

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Mark Jos'e 26 August 2008

ill be sane, i know you ve been looking for me at last you found me.

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