Looking Out My Window Poem by Julie Smith

Looking Out My Window

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My lover, where are you?
On a gentle summer evening
I see you in the greens of the trees
Imagining the lonely harbours
And the windmills that we fight
In the end it's all a nonchalant whisper
Of a life that we live
Apart from the roof tops
That we climb
Lighting candles on balconies
Thinking of the one
We'd like to share the cigarette with
That's still unlit

Tuesday, September 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,loneliness,longing,love,missing
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
So welcome to Part II of my poem selection! I had some kind of break and now I'm back to share new poems with you from the new chapter of my life that just started!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Jones 29 March 2017

excellent Imagery and the yearning of the heart! the sentiment is just precious, Thinking of the one We'd like to share the cigarette with That's still unlit - touched at my heart! a beautiful poem that i will be adding to my favorite list! a beautciful concept written and captured beautifully!

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