Warren Falcon

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Loose Train Hokku-no-renga


For the blind woman
on the train every
journey is inner

She touches my shoulder,
moves one seat ahead
feels the winter collar

metal ring pinned
to its shoulder
smiles when she touches it

dark rings of her eyes
light up momentarily

What universes are in the heads all around me

Submitted: Sunday, October 07, 2012
Edited: Sunday, October 07, 2012

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