Loquaciously I Ask Poem by Captain Cur

Loquaciously I Ask

Rating: 5.0


Captain Cur,

I should choose the outcast knight
if I would have my choice,
he would make a wholesome sight
when mounted on his horse;
enchantresses charm his head
with soft seductive voice
then lie waiting in his bed
to rip his armor off.

I might choose his fallen grace
a bishop less his robe
I should stare more at his face
than what he has exposed.
Should I look when he turns round
he's bending down to pray
is that a smile or a frown
it's really hard to say.

Impregnable castle
a steep faced rhyming ruse
I then a loyal vassal
or a seductive muse?
I would batten down it's strength
secure it's iron gate
then take pleasure in the length
the Captain takes his break.

How you dream my tricky pawn
to steal away the light,
how you plead and how you fawn
to sleep with me at night.
I will write you no more rhymes
the promise that I cast
have you drunk that daisy wine
loquaciously I ask?

Mon amant de la mer,

I have swore a solemn oath
to fend you from my mind
though you constantly provoke
awaiting my reply.
What is it you need to hear;
'I'll love you throughout time'
with what subtlety you coax
my words will not deny.

Loquacious

Tuesday, May 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: letters
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From a series of letters written between Captain Cur and a Lady of Renown.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 27 May 2014

Excellent write Captain. A true story teller. Thank You

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