Losing My Heart. Poem by Fay Slimm

Losing My Heart.

Rating: 5.0


With your head bent carelessly
..................................on my breast,

And your legs hot and trembling
................................. near my knee,

You lift your brown eyes,
........................and I feel caressed.

I struggle, awash with
................................... desire, Alfie.


Silky black curly hair,
........................ melting warm eyes.

Then stroking, I hear
.............. your soft breathy moans.

Snuggling together,
.................... I feel quite surprised

That you, with me, Alfie,
.......................... seem so at home.


Do all puppy dogs
.......................settle down so well?

My arms, encircling
.................such trusting toy frame

Feel soft tongued warmth,
................ so Alfie, please do tell.

Am I about to be losing
........................... my heart again?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 08 November 2009

Well I pretty much lost mine, reading this. Want to go find a new puppy now..(smile)

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Alison Cassidy 21 November 2009

As a fellow dog lover, I adore this poem. As a poet, I admire the clever way you have introduced your subject (I was quite aroused there for a moment, he he) . A joyful poem about love and licks! Hugs to your both, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Eyan Desir 21 November 2009

the beggining of the poem Was very sweet I liked the way you ended it surprise ending.... good job

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Patricia Gale 19 November 2009

Loved it! What a catch in the end!

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John Knight 19 November 2009

Hi Fay - Beautiful - I love all your November Poems - You are a pleasure a perfect poet. What is it with Girls and Puppy Dogs? - For reincarnation I've ticked the box 'Golden Labrador - nice house in Cornwall - with lots of daughters! '. Us Boys would all love the same treatment - Snuggling - Stroking - Hugging - Kissing & Licking - I'll be your puppy Fay! In return we'd promise to be Faithful and Excited just to be with you. I love the structure - liguistically elegant couplets and lots of.................................. to give us space to use our cannine imagination. We all lost our hearts to this poem - lovely - TEN. Love you in Poetry - JOHN

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Georgia Girl 09 November 2009

LOL, as I started reading this I just knew that it was going to be the sweetest love poem and lo 'n behold IT WAS! ! LOL just not a romantic one -lol..... very very sweet love poem about a best friend loved ever so dearly-10+++

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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