Losing My Mind Poem by Erika Wingo

Losing My Mind

Rating: 4.8


I honestly feel like
I'm losing my mind
Without you
As time keeps on passing
I'm falling behind
The world is unclear
I can't focus
As if I'm going blind
I'm constantly searching
For what I can't find
I honestly feel like
I'm losing my mind

Without You.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A tantalizing trumpet that that's loaded with a loneliness that pulls and grips with passion. Well done my friend!

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V P Mahur 30 March 2014

Dear Erica, The deep feelings of true love are clearly reflected here. Nice poem. Thanks and please reply

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Amitava Sur 08 March 2014

A Very nice expression of the state of mind. Behind these few liners a long and heavy amt. sorrows are hidden, what I can smell and realize. I only can keep my loving hands on your shoulder.

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Donnie Wolff 12 February 2014

That loss, or gain, is the only way I can write. Otherwise I completely lack inspiration. Anyway beautiful poem that a lot of us relate. :)

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Khairul Ahsan 22 January 2014

These are natural feelings- that haunt you when you are without the person you love, lean on and look for inspiration. A well written poem.9/10.

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Erika Wingo

Erika Wingo

St. Paul, Minnesota
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