Losing Their Love Poem by Timothy Weiermann

Losing Their Love

Rating: 4.5


Watching the clouds
Drifting, careless
Watching the clouds
Shifting, loveless

Flexible freedom, no longer tightly bound
Higher life, never lost but never quite found

Without a purpose
Living loveless
Without a purpose
Living lifeless

Missing stability, hardly supporting myself
Yearning for a love, but unable where I dwell

Watching the moon
Fixed, pulsing
Watching the moon
Immobile, loving

Unable to feel the light caress
Unable to embrace all but death’s kiss

Eternal darkness
Forever and dark
Eternal darkness
Impending, and hard

Watching their lives
Slowly fade to nothing
Watching their loves
Slowly grow to everything

Flexible freedom, no longer tightly bound
Higher life, never lost but never quite found

Watching the clouds
Drifting, careless
Watching the clouds
Shifting loveless

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
immortal Butterfly 20 March 2009

I Love This! You're A Great Writer! ~Autumn~

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Paul Tousignant 14 August 2008

Each new poem is a breath of fresh air, they just keep getting better and better. Good work Paul

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Victoria Isles 08 August 2008

Another awesome poem! Keep writing!

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Lacey Unknown 05 August 2008

Good imagery. I like it a lot. beautiful... again! :) ~Lacey~

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Anong All 30 July 2008

Nice poem, sounds musical.

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