Loss Poem by Poetry Guy

Loss

Rating: 5.0


I only knew you for 23 years,
That wasn't long enough.

Life conspired to take you from us;
Circumstances beat you.

I only knew you for 23 years,
It was no where near enough.

You left far too soon,
I miss you.

for a person who is no longer with us.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 29 December 2005

This poem has special meaning for me PG, because of those 23 years! That is how long I had my late husband in my life. A strange co-incidence. I enjoyed your poem. 10 from Tai, sorry for your loss also.

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Charles Chaim Wax 16 December 2005

loss spurs the heart to sadness and a way from that sadness and often a poem gives peace or something close to it a fine poem

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