Loss Poem by Crimson Love

Loss

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Loss is something one deals with in their own way,
I've lost so much, its all but gone,
Out of it all..... I miss my mind the most.
Not able to think, not able to remeber anything,
Besides what was left in my heart,
all the loss.......all the pain, can't be forgotten,
The heart remebers all,
Every word thats hurt you,
every person that has Betrayed you......
all remebered within the scars left on your heart,
Lost in an ending, always hoping to restart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 29 September 2011

I mount to my heap of loss and leap from there to win... Really wonderful poem... Great poetry here...

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Kalpak Kaplash 28 September 2011

emotions very well crafted...........good poem!

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Linda Maree 27 September 2011

all remebered within the scars left on your heart. i love this particular line. The heart does remeber all but allow it to remeber the good as well.

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