Lost Poem by mona martinez

Lost

Rating: 5.0


by: sabrina and mona.
look at the world,
nothing makes sense,
in my mind i'm lost,
in more ways than you know,
too many things on my mind,
but, i have to take it,
one step at a time,

everything seems lost,
the world is just a blur,
as the passing people go by,
i think of how things were,
now im lost,
in my hearts content,
there were 2 paths, and thats the way i went.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
vamsi Krishna 29 May 2009

well written poom mona well said

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a sad but well said poem..do the poet fail in finding an exit for the closed gate..in the lost they found another way...some how i feel that tosay...

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Shashendra Amalshan 16 May 2009

hey...things have happened..i feel like i m bit lost too.. innermost feelings are expressed well mona...

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