Dan Brown

Rookie - 62 Points (20.02.1988 / Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK)

Lost - Poem by Dan Brown

Lost in a world, that scares me to death,
Lost in a crowd, I'm losing my breath.
Lost as a boy, lost as a man,
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  • Bonnie Rose (11/16/2016 6:21:00 PM)


    A very wonderful poem about a feeling I know well. I felt every word. (Report) Reply

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  • Rebecca Navarre (10/13/2016 10:40:00 PM)


    Outstanding! ! ! Poem! So Moving! So Deeply Heart Touching! ! ! Thank You so much for sharing this write! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Raiven Moore (8/25/2016 8:04:00 AM)


    it's low tone draws out my compassionate side but, the end tells me they don't stay down for long as they still hve the spark of grit and will inside of them. May their rise be quicker than the fall (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (4/8/2016 9:10:00 PM)


    Loaded with looseness is this creative, candid and compelling composition! (Report) Reply

  • Tracy Craighead (2/26/2016 1:25:00 AM)


    Beautiful, I hate that there is so much sadness, I just want to give you a hug.. but the strength is in the struggle and in Your ability to verbalize and identify your feelings. Such a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Adele Connolly (5/31/2015 4:58:00 AM)


    lovely but very sad.. very good with words and expressing yourself i like it alot. (Report) Reply

  • Panmelys Panmelys (3/28/2015 4:36:00 AM)


    Fluid movement - nice rhythm - one is glad to arrive at the end stanza which clinches the poetic passion and overrides the man's deception. Perhaps it could be called a poem of Hope. Nice work. Panmelys (Report) Reply

  • Takondwa Hauya (12/3/2014 2:09:00 AM)


    This is really great.. kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Emily Wallace (2/17/2010 12:06:00 PM)


    this is a super good poem (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (6/17/2008 3:20:00 AM)


    The more desperate u are, more hopeful u become....nice write up (Report) Reply

  • (2/5/2008 8:49:00 PM)


    great poem, keep writing (Report) Reply

  • (2/4/2008 8:32:00 AM)


    This is my favourite line:
    'Lost as a boy, lost as a man, '
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  • (1/26/2008 9:29:00 AM)


    wow that brought a tear to my eye thats were i am lost and looking for a way out beautiful (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2007 1:55:00 PM)


    wow, that was AMAZING. I know exactly how you feel, what you are saying. wow. (Report) Reply

  • (12/6/2007 5:05:00 PM)


    That poem just...wow...it got me interested.....Your a realy good poet. (Report) Reply

  • (10/20/2007 9:08:00 PM)


    i think everybody has felt lost at one point and u have a skill to capture it in words (Report) Reply

  • (9/21/2007 12:21:00 PM)


    wow, this is an amazing poem. it really captures the way you feel, i hope you dont feel like this all the time, i used to be kinda lost with who i am as well. if u ever need anyone to talk to....im here
    -Rachael
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  • (9/21/2007 12:17:00 PM)


    wow, this is an amazing poem. it really captures the way you feel, i hope you dont feel like this all the time, i used to be kinda lost with who i am as well. if u ever need anyone to talk to....im here
    -Rachael
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  • (3/23/2007 10:02:00 AM)


    Beautiful, elegant and sad, so sad. A painful poem indeed but a lovely one. There's strength in the struggle and theres beauty in breaking lost one, every peice will be mended and your path becomes clear, run towards the light even though engulfed by fear, take heart dear fellow be strong, be true and at the end of the road the one that is the light is waiting for you. haha im silly sorry that was stupid but anyways great poem
    Merci Pour Le Venin,
    Janelle
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  • (1/10/2007 7:17:00 AM)


    Danny, this one is absolutely beautiful, very deep emotions, and very good wording. I love it, and thank u for sharing it with us.
    Mary
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