Lost Poem by SALINI NAIR

Lost

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I saw you drowned in the depths
Silent eyes is wet always

Trench that took out your breathe
I glimpse it in this silence

Arms that tired in that flow
I still glimpse it in my palms

My dreams shrink to those depths
As these tears form an ocean

Strive yet search for treasure always
As that pearl was my fortune

Life still struggles and argues inside
As thirst for life is more always! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved

Wednesday, December 10, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We will live even after the death of dear ones
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 13 December 2014

Separation or hardships of life shouldn't dishearten us! Continue to strive! There is an insatiable craving in us to live and succeed ! Very philosophical!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 13 December 2014

Craving for life propels us to see life even after death.........profound thought and write

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Akhtar Jawad 12 December 2014

Life still struggles and argues inside As thirst for life is more always! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A nice and thoughtful write. This the thirst of life that forced man to believe in a life even after death.

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