Lost Chance Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Lost Chance

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Yes window may bring in
With melody to sing
The birds may chirp on branches
To make it beautiful on every inches

Yes memory is filled
With deep hole drilled
In heart
To feel the part

She has departed
And parted
With lot many things to remember
And go down with her

We are eager
To hear
Her voice again
As we are now in pain

She may sing again
With same plain
Language with sweet voice
That shall have echo with promise

She may not be back
But we shall be packed
With her remembrance
As lost chance

Friday, September 5, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

Yes window may bring in With melody to sing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

painful hole in heart leaves....................... anonymo magnifico9 hours ago ...........only memories! ................................ Comment +1 ? Broken Lullabies?10 hours ago Not sure who its about unless its just a remembrance poem but no matter if its personal or not its still very nicely said? Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

Love it. Johnny Martinez10 hours ago She may sing again, , language with sweet voice, . great lines Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

Kept me interested Angie Keel10 hours ago I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 36 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome maithili roy 2 mins · Edited · Unlike · 1

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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